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post #11 of 31 Old 06-16-2011, 10:22 PM Thread Starter
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haha thanks :) sorry it's not much

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post #12 of 31 Old 06-17-2011, 06:03 AM
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Naw thanks! :)
If you have time, could you do one about my Mum's horse? :)

Name: Jewelz.
Breed: Arab.
Colour: Palomino.
Gender: Mare.
Height: 14.2hh.

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post #13 of 31 Old 06-17-2011, 09:13 PM Thread Starter
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what a lil beauty :)


A golden horse with golden wings and golden flowing mane
A horse so wild, so free and great none could ever be the same
A jewel at heart a jewel by name, a special girl that loves who loves her
A horse that looks as if she was made from pure gold, frankincense and myrrh
But of course this horse is not only looks that look fit for a queen
The inside glows fiercly, and it's obviously seen
Like a little lollie that's sweet and sticky and gets stuck between your teeth
this little mare has got stuck inside my heart

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post #14 of 31 Old 06-19-2011, 02:55 AM
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Mum loves it!
She thinks it's cute and says thanks!

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post #15 of 31 Old 06-28-2011, 09:37 PM
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Breed:Haflinger-Pinto/Arabian
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Persinaloty: Nice, Cute, Trustworthy
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post #16 of 31 Old 06-29-2011, 12:08 AM Thread Starter
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this is very much fantasy but still pretty good if i do say so myself


When lying in bed i thought to myself imagine what it would be like,
to own a pony so trustworthy and beautiful, a heart that shines like light
A pony I can trust, to carry me safely, to own and to love and to care
With so much spirit, so charming, a gelding i'd like, not a mare
Oh just the thought of it sets my heart into despair
Then, what was that!? I heard a strong whiney drifting through the air!
I look out my window and what should be there!?
A little brown pinto looks up at me and whinneys once again
I gasped thinking i was going insane!
I rubbed my eyes and blinked twice hard but still he had not dissapeared
I smiled at him, knowing he was not to be feared.
We are still together to this day and i still call him my wonder horse
But only i know the secret we share.... of course



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post #17 of 31 Old 06-29-2011, 08:27 AM
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omg i love it thanks sooo much!!!!!
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haha thanks :) read my other stories :P

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post #19 of 31 Old 06-29-2011, 08:48 AM
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i am!! they are all so good!!!
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post #20 of 31 Old 06-29-2011, 08:58 AM Thread Starter
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just uploaded HEAPS more please critique

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