When you're about to turn on the first pole, push your horse out a little bit more with your leg to set her up. That way she won't get confused and try to duck in too early. As for in between poles, it looks good, keep using your legs!
For the end pole, push her out a little bit more and sit and turn.
As for the very last pole, it looks good.
I think your horse could go a bit faster, but until you get used to the pattern, go at the speed you are comfortable. Slowly make your way up there. :)
You're looking good!