Work on your timing for changes. Your horse is being generous, but you are going to run into trouble for sure in the 2's. What a nice horse and super breeding. Do you own this one? Get that extra polish you need at the fix-a-test (I assume that's what the clinic is) and you'll be good to go. Best of luck to you both!
Thanks for the support everyone! I will definitely be posting our results up here :P
EA - I rode this through with my coach for a reason - this is not in the critique section for a reason. I trust her opinion and judgement and my horse and I are working towards our goals with her, not randoms on the internet :)
But thank you for your opinion.