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    08-07-2009, 04:50 AM
mighty warrior (critique?)


Lol! Anyway! I took these pictures down in Nevada and thought I would make a little store out of them for you guys!! Feel free to critique my images as I do want to be a photographer! Enjoy!!

This store starts out with our noble warrior who was very noble and strong!

The warrior helped all the people in the land, well as long as there was a gain for him in doing so. As he walked though the mighty wilderness he heard a maiden cry out for help! He soon found the maiden how was stranded on a large rock!!

He came to the maiden, and asked her what was wrong. She told him she was stuck on this big rock, but it had quite a nice view and the rock would now be her kingdom! Well this made the knight very mad about being called for no reason! So he decided he would take her kingdom for his own!!! But this was a very big big rock... he then told the maiden to lay down as her legs must be very tried, and she agreed, then before she even saw what was coming the knight grabbed her by her legs and used her as a ladder to climb up onto the rock!

He then took the maidens magic sword placing a spell on her and making her bow down to him!!

The knight was so amazed with how mighty his new sword was he began to swing it around so that anyone in the land would know how mighty he was!

He then swung the sword behind him accidentally hitting the maiden in the face breaking the magic sword!

The knight was deaply depressed!

He was so depressed he then slid of the rock to go find another magic sword! Little did he know a horrid beast was waiting for him!

The beast tricked the knight with her wicked smile and took the might warrior away in her white chariot where he was never seen again!!

The End!

Can you believe I took these all at random??!! Lol!! My sister and brother were playing on th rock, and he really did hit her and I can't remember how he broke the stick! Lol!! Hope you enjoyed my lame story and pics!!
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    08-07-2009, 08:35 AM
Green Broke
TA, thank-you for the pictures and very creative narrative! Couldn't think of a better way to put me in the right frame of mind at the start of my day.

BTW, very good pictures, and I think you have a talent for childrens books. Just a thought.
    08-07-2009, 01:35 PM
That was a very funny storie and nice pictures BTW
    08-07-2009, 01:41 PM
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I think this was very great little story with great pics .
    08-07-2009, 03:53 PM
Originally Posted by Walkamile    
TA, thank-you for the pictures and very creative narrative! Couldn't think of a better way to put me in the right frame of mind at the start of my day.

BTW, very good pictures, and I think you have a talent for childrens books. Just a thought.
haha!! Thanks!! I was really board last night as you can tell.

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