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post #1 of 4 Old 05-18-2010, 02:49 PM Thread Starter
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A Few Poems :)

I tend to write when I'm sad. So most of my poems are depressing. I haven't written in forever, but maybe I need to.

This one is about hte guy I lost my virginity to.

You looked at me one day
And liked what you saw,
But you didn’t want risk,
No connections at all.
Just something to play witg,
Pull out of a box,
Tug on my strings,
Then give me a toss.
I was a toy,
Just fun for you.
No harm done,
Well none that you knew.
With each tug in my strings
You tugged on my heart
Tearing it more
Until it ripped apart.
Once you came callin
But I wasn’t around
You searched and searched;
I was no where to be found.
For a moment you grieved,
A child’s toy missing,
But, open that box
And another toy you’ll be kissing.

Not sure when I wrote this or what i was feeling.

Bottom of The Bottle

I can't see
I can't breath
My body is numb
My senses dulled
I'm at the bottom of the bottle
There is no where else to go
This world is to harsh
All I want is peace
Chaos is empty
Peace has no vacancy
I'm lonley
I'm tired
It's raining on me
And I'm at the bottom of the bottle

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Originally Posted by spookychick13
What Lone said.
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Those are beautiful on their own, sad way. Keep writing if you feel it helps you to sort out your thoughts.

Also I tend to vent some of my feelings to poetry every now and then. Actually I've felt I should write some new poem soon.

"On hyviä vuosia, kauniita muistoja, mutta kuitenkaan, en saata unohtaa,
Että koskaan en ole yksin, varjo seuraa onneain.
Vaikka myrsky hetkeksi tyyntyykin, varjo seuraa onneain.
Ja pian taas uusin hönkäyksin, varjo seuraa onneain.
Hei tuu mun luo, pieneksi hetkeksi. Puhutaan, varjoni, valkoiseksi enkeliksi."

Pelle Miljoona - Varjo seuraa onneain

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Yeah. These are from a long time ago. When I was about 15. Since I have met my fiance I have only felt the need to write once. And it's not a sad poem. I'll post it when I find it. :)

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What Lone said.
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