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        05-18-2010, 02:49 PM
      #1
    Green Broke
    A Few Poems :)

    I tend to write when I'm sad. So most of my poems are depressing. I haven't written in forever, but maybe I need to.

    This one is about hte guy I lost my virginity to.

    You looked at me one day
    And liked what you saw,
    But you didnít want risk,
    No connections at all.
    Just something to play witg,
    Pull out of a box,
    Tug on my strings,
    Then give me a toss.
    I was a toy,
    Just fun for you.
    No harm done,
    Well none that you knew.
    With each tug in my strings
    You tugged on my heart
    Tearing it more
    Until it ripped apart.
    Once you came callin
    But I wasnít around
    You searched and searched;
    I was no where to be found.
    For a moment you grieved,
    A childís toy missing,
    But, open that box
    And another toy youíll be kissing.


    Not sure when I wrote this or what I was feeling.

    Bottom of The Bottle

    I can't see
    I can't breath
    My body is numb
    My senses dulled
    I'm at the bottom of the bottle
    There is no where else to go
    This world is to harsh
    All I want is peace
    Chaos is empty
    Peace has no vacancy
    I'm lonley
    I'm tired
    It's raining on me
    And I'm at the bottom of the bottle
         
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        05-18-2010, 03:17 PM
      #2
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    Those are beautiful on their own, sad way. Keep writing if you feel it helps you to sort out your thoughts.

    Also I tend to vent some of my feelings to poetry every now and then. Actually I've felt I should write some new poem soon.
         
        05-18-2010, 09:54 PM
      #3
    Green Broke
    Yeah. These are from a long time ago. When I was about 15. Since I have met my fiance I have only felt the need to write once. And it's not a sad poem. I'll post it when I find it. :)
         
        05-19-2010, 09:35 AM
      #4
    Foal
    I have to make 25 posts in order to see this months picture contest and vote so HELLO EVERYONE.
         

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