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It's good Jordan! A couple of tips... I know at school they teach you to smudge graphite to blend it, but don't!! You'll make it look much more striking if you just work it all with your pencil, and only to very slight touch ups with a tissue.
To make it stand out more, you need to have 'tonal values' in there. 10 is the darkest, one is the lightest. So 10 is black, 1 is white. You need to have 10 spread evenly over the drawing, and 1 spread evenly over it usually alongside 10. So put a 10 in the lower bits of the forelock where it starts growing from the head, 10 in the eyes, 10 in the middle of the ears, 10 in the nostrils and a little in the mouth, and a smidgen under the jaw for the shadow. Then 1's for all the highlights. Work around those two values and your drawing will be drawn right off the page ;)