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Is it bad??? plz give tips on how to make this better :)

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        01-06-2008, 10:24 PM
      #1
    Green Broke
    Is it bad??? plz give tips on how to make this better :)



    Don't be afriad to say w.e you want to say it looks better on paper 2 me but I don't think its that bad what do you think its my very first time drawing will :) or any horse lol
         
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        01-06-2008, 10:44 PM
      #2
    Weanling
    It's really great for your first time. Some suggestions:
    - Neck is too long
    - Really big ears
    - His face looks a bit swollen...maybe make it smaller?

    Nice job, though! :)
         
        01-07-2008, 02:54 AM
      #3
    Green Broke
    Thxs for the reply I knew something was wrong with the face and neck I just couldnt figure it out ty :) ill practice somemore :)
         
        01-08-2008, 07:04 PM
      #4
    Foal
    I agree with Cheval and you also need to give the horse more muscle on the shoulder. It looks very weak and not completely attached. I really like the hind-quarters though. Were you working off a picture or doing it by memory?
         
        01-08-2008, 07:09 PM
      #5
    Green Broke
    Sorta both I would just quickly look at it then try and draw it I know I should have studied it a little more but then the rest I sorta forgot to look at the picture xD thanks for the reply :) lol if I draw another one ill post it to see if i've improved any
         
        01-12-2008, 03:05 AM
      #6
    Weanling
    It looks good, just the head is a bit unproportional, the neck is a little too long, and maybe make the shoulder a bit wider/larger? Good job though!
         
        01-12-2008, 11:55 PM
      #7
    Foal
    When you are stuck on what is wrong with a drawing I have had my art professors tell me to look at the work upside down in a mirror. This detaches you from your drawing a bit (if you have ever drawn something and thought it was fantastic and then come back to look at it a couple months later and went yuck! Then you know what I mean by being detached) and a different view sometimes lets you see what you couldn't before.
         
        01-13-2008, 06:54 PM
      #8
    Green Broke
    Lol I think I might do that thanks for ur replys :) ill post a new drawing soon to see if you guys think I got any better
         

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