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        07-19-2010, 01:18 AM
      #1
    Weanling
    Critique?



    Thanks I drew this several months ago, but I'd love to hear what you guys think of him. It's a photo of my friend's gelding, in his winter coat, when he was a yearling.
         
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        07-19-2010, 02:07 AM
      #2
    Trained
    Your proportions are excellent, well done :)

    My main critique is that you need to sharpen a few little details up, and work through your tonal values. So make his nostril, eyes and ears stand out a little more by adding some sharp, dark lines along the focal points. Also darken a little under his face along his neck, to make his head stand out. And last but not least, the forelock needs a little more details ;) Get a sharp, hard pencil and draw a few hairs through it, flicking the pencil to allow the hairs to 'stray' a little giving the impression that there is a light breeze picking up the hairs.

    Lovely work!
         
        07-19-2010, 02:36 AM
      #3
    Weanling
    Thank you very much (:

    I'll definitely fix it up, I agree with everything you pointed out.
         

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