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        02-22-2010, 04:46 PM
      #1
    Foal
    Critique on new sketch

    I did this one from a photo I had taken at the RDS. Unfortunately I don't remember who the horse and rider were!

    Anyway, I know the guy's face is missing, I couldnt quite get it right. Also the paper I was using was a bit bumpy to be ideal for sketching, but other than that, any advice on how I could improve??

    Thanks

         
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        02-22-2010, 05:01 PM
      #2
    Green Broke
    It looks really good! I'd raise the girth and the bridle away from the body a little. If you know what I mean. Kind of looks like it's all built in. I think you did an amazing job : )
         
        02-22-2010, 05:03 PM
      #3
    Yearling


    I redlined it ;)
         
        02-22-2010, 05:20 PM
      #4
    Foal
    Thank you! I must work on the outline a bit more, I tend to get a bit impatient!

    Also, yeah, I had planned on raising the girth and bridle from the horse, but totally forgot haha =P
         
        02-23-2010, 12:28 PM
      #5
    Showing
    Great drawing!
         

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