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        07-31-2009, 01:01 PM
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    Yearling
    critique please. ?

    This is my first edited picture I have done. Could you tell me who I could improve and what you think about it so here it is.







    What do you think ?
         
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        07-31-2009, 01:05 PM
      #2
    Foal
    It's too blury, the horse doesn't fit in, you need to make him a little smaller. Besides that its a cute picture.
         
        07-31-2009, 01:07 PM
      #3
    Yearling
    Okayy thanks, I will try that next time, to be honest I thought that as wll, anything ele except making it smaller ?
         
        07-31-2009, 01:36 PM
      #4
    Weanling
    How did you do that? What program did you use?
         
        07-31-2009, 02:32 PM
      #5
    Yearling
    Paint shop pro, I can try and do one for you if you like but it will not come out very good as it will be my secound attempt
         
        07-31-2009, 08:18 PM
      #6
    Trained
    Don't forget his shadow. See how the plant he's next to has a shadow? Also, maybe try putting him a little lower into the sand so the tops of some of his hooves are covered.
         
        08-01-2009, 11:14 AM
      #7
    Yearling
    Ohh yeh, thnaks for your help I will take this into consideration.
         
        08-04-2009, 11:43 PM
      #8
    Weanling
    I agree with the others also the horses neck seems to be cut off a little...looking good though
         
        08-10-2009, 04:18 AM
      #9
    Weanling
    I was going to say the same as myboypuck about the shadow plus maybe as he is cantering maybe try to somehow spray paint it so it looks like some sand is being kicked up. Looks nice though
         

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