Originally Posted by Kayty
You have definitely got the right idea, you tonal values are quite good and detail is lovely.
You just need to look at getting your proportions better. The face is very short and the nose too rounded, with ears spaced too widely apart. Concentrate on getting the basic features in the right spot, and all of the rest will fall into place.
Thanks, I used a small picture from a calendar as a reference which I now think has been taken at a bit of a weird angle, not completely straight on, which has made things seem out of proportion. Because I measured distances etc and it all pretty much matches lol!