Don't scrap it just because the eye is not located absolutely correctly. And yes, the nostril is a little bit small, as is the muzzle. However don't scrap the whole piece because it reads reasonably well as a whole. Rather, bring a little punch to it by darkening eyes. The eyes are always the center focus of a drawing, particularly in and up close drama drawing like that. Bye accenting the eyes with greater contrast the whole drawing will be better. I know that with charcoal it can be quite hard to get really dark dark. Overall it's a nice drawing with good feeling with the with the main moving and all. Do not scrap it
Last edited by tinyliny; 03-30-2014 at 03:42 PM.