*jaw drops* this is your first official time drawing a person?? Well here's another reason to be jealous of you!
It looks really good! If anything i'd say the left eye (his left) doesn't quite look slanted back enough...if that makes sense.
But my goodness girl, this looks great!
Good luck on your new adventure. I've been working on people for a few years now, it's a challenge!
Can't wait to see more!