Tinyliny -- Thank you so, so much for all of your input. You notice things about the way I draw and it helps me out. It is also interesting to see the things you've pointed out (and jaydee too) about my drawings that I haven't really noticed before.
I think all of your drawings and paintings seem very free and fresh. You show the mood and emotion in them so well. I wouldn't have ever possibly guessed you might struggle with it. I love your work :)
About the lettering... I do tend to use that too much, because I want it to take the place of the background, as I detest (and I mean DETEST) drawing backgrounds. I don't know why I don't like it. I actually kind of regret doing the lettering on the top of the sketch; it does seem like too much. I think that the "True Love" would have been better, but once I drew it I couldn't erase it without it showing. I have a bad habit about starting something dark, so that I can't erase it thoroughly... Anyway, thanks for pointing that out! I will be careful about what I do with that in future.
WSArabians -- LOL No, it's not Khemosabi. (I had to look up "Khemosabi" to see who/what he was; I didn't know) It was copied from a random picture I found somewhere. It was a blurry one, so it was kind of hard to copy. I had to just make up some stuff to take the place of details that weren't there.
TheLauren -- I'll try to start on the baby one soon so I can post it up on here! I might post pictures of my progress. :)