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        03-19-2010, 07:29 PM
      #1
    Weanling
    New drawing - critique :)

    When I started this drawing I was incredibly frustrated. I did the entire thing with a 6B pencil, and at the dark parts I got my anger out quite well You can't really see in the pic, but this is a DARK drawing. The black is true black this time. I tried for about 10 minutes to get a picture that showed the true contrast/darkness, but the whole picture is really dark on that. Took me about an hour.

    I must say though, I'm kinda proud of the tack :)



    This picture is ridiculously dark, but you can kinda see what I see in real life (darks v. Light) better:
    http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t...g/SDC10182.jpg

    I will try and get a better picture tomorrow. -_-

    For whatever reason, I don't like the eye. Is it just me or is there a lack of expression? Help?

    Critique please :) Be harsh and honest, as always. Don't worry, you won't offend me (:
         
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        03-19-2010, 11:51 PM
      #2
    Weanling
    I think it looks very nice. And I agree about the tack-nice job. I'd recommend using a couple different types of pencil. That way you get a nice dimension.
    And this would look awesome in charcoal too =)
         
        03-20-2010, 11:29 AM
      #3
    Weanling
    Hah the 6B was the only one I could find. Usually I attempt to use a variation...though I usually get "stuck" in one area, whether it's all H's or all B's.

    I've never worked with charcoal...maybe that's what I'll do over spring break?
         
        03-20-2010, 04:22 PM
      #4
    Weanling
    Charcoal's a bunch of fun...kinda messy but lotsa fun. It gives the drawing a different look since it's a different texture. And it shades really well.
    I highly recommend it!
         
        03-28-2010, 04:51 PM
      #5
    Weanling
    Maybe I'll stop by Michaels and see if they have charcoal for over spring break (which starts thursday! Yay!) I've been wanting to try something new for a while now! :)
         
        03-28-2010, 09:51 PM
      #6
    Foal
    I like it, it looks good. I would agree to use a few diff pencils and remember, the good book says that the eye is the window to the soul.

    Good luck!!!
    Wess
         
        04-01-2010, 09:00 PM
      #7
    Showing
    Looks fantastic!! The eye especially. They are very difficult to dimension. Good for you. Looking forwards to seeing more of your artwork.
         
        04-04-2010, 09:04 PM
      #8
    Weanling
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Flintlock    
    I like it, it looks good. I would agree to use a few diff pencils and remember, the good book says that the eye is the window to the soul.

    Good luck!!!
    Wess
    thanks :) Yeah, I wish I had been able to rustle up a few other ones. But I was angry and I wanted to draw and I only had the 6B haha.

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by My2Geldings    
    Looks fantastic!! The eye especially. They are very difficult to dimension. Good for you. Looking forwards to seeing more of your artwork.
    I still feel like something about the eye is missing...it doesn't really have any expression, almost? I dunno.

    Thank you! I actually have another drawing (horse, I have like five non-equine drawings but I don't think I can post them here) but I'm not yet sure how I feel about it so I'm not going to post it. But a member on here asked me to draw it for them :)
         
        04-10-2010, 11:16 PM
      #9
    Foal
    DANGG! Love the detail!
         
        04-11-2010, 11:26 AM
      #10
    Weanling
    Thank you :) I am kind of surprised at the amount of detail I got...it's usually my worst enemy.
         

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