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        11-01-2009, 04:36 PM
      #11
    Started
    It's a bazillion times better than anything I could ever do, so I honestly have no critiques.

    Gorgeous!
         
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        11-02-2009, 04:47 AM
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    Trained
    Sensational Liz!!!! You've improved 10 fold in this one, don't touch it it's excellent how it is!
         
        11-02-2009, 05:59 AM
      #13
    Yearling
    Thats so good. Maybe if I tried in Art class, I might one day get good at drawing. Practice makes perfect.
         
        11-08-2009, 12:43 PM
      #14
    Foal
    Hmm... I'm going to critique a couple little things.

    The rider looks like they're puckering their lips out like they're going to give a big ol' kiss to somone.
    The rider's arm is also insanely skinny. Like there's a jacket wrapped around their bones.
    The rider's helmet looks like it was shoved all the way down on top of their skull or like they're wearing a helmet skull cap of some sort.

    The horse's near hoof looks more like a side view hoof.
    The horse's far hoof looks more like a fron view hoof.
    The horse's ears are on two different levels of the head...
    The horse's elbow is a bit funky. It looks as is it has no shoulder... It also looks too geometric.
    It looks like the horse has no neck. I know that 3/4 view horse necks are insane to try and draw so... I'm just saying kudos for getting it that close. I would have failed and given up.

    Now by critiquing, I am in no way saying your art stinks or anything, I'm just pointing out minor flaws. That is it.
         

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