Thank you for the compliments and helpful tips! The paper I used is grey scale designed for charcoal, which I had originally planned to use, but since I am far more comfortable with graphite that is what I ended up using. I agree the tooth did give me some fits, it is really hard to get a smooth shadow using graphite on that paper.
I drew the right hand first, and it just flowed, but it was while drawing the left hand that I realized I have never even attempted to draw a human hand before, I worked it until I was afraid to overwork it, when I reached a "good enough" point I quit. If I had thought about it sooner, I would have done a couple practice studies first.
Thank you for pointing out the issue with the lips, I see where I can improve, in the photo her lips are slightly parted, and I was trying to catch the shadow of the upper lip on the bottom lip, but obviously it is too dark and solid making it look like she's wearing lipstick. I think I can fix that pretty easily.
I appreciate the feedback, thanks again!