My post came off a little overbearing, not my intention and not really my style, no need for calming heh. Things tend to look more austere in print.
To be honest, the term 'ewe neck' gets bandied about a lot in these types of critiques, no matter what the breed and it is a bit of a pet hate of mine, sorry if you bore the brunt of my frustration SRCM
However, these types of critiques can be a great learning exercise also. For comparison, let me illustrate:
Here is a true 'ewe neck' where you can clearly see the characteristic s-shape of the vertebrae: EweNeck.jpg
Here is one of mine when I picked her up with a very undermuscled neck: img001.jpg
The difference after a lot of conditioning: Angel neck 2.jpg
Jaytee, she looks to be a nice mare, keep us posted with her progress!