I'm going to be honest and mean this in the nicest way possible. I agree that your chances of leasing this horse for a fee is slim. I would do a free lease. PM me if you would like a copy of a lease contract that I use.
Your ad photos from the other thread are horrid. Know your target audience! To me it seems like hunter/jumper lesson pony? Pull his mane (the long chop is ugly and not breed or discipline appropriate) clip his bridle path and his legs and give him a good bath before you take photos or video. Your tack should be clean and saddle pad washed. Barrow a bridle.. riding in a halter for a sale photo/video is tacky. If you do not want him ridden in a bit, then get a side-pull for your bridle they are cheap. You also need to look your best. Clean breeches, boots, belt and a polo type shirt. You are almost there, just tuck in the shirt and take off the loud jewelry. Your helmet is fitted incorrectly and your hair needs to be pinned back or tucked neatly in your helmet. I say this because sloppy makes you and your horse look incompetent.
Your ad needs to be shorter and more organized.
Paragraph 1 - Suitability
"Prince Phillip", other known as "P" is a 10 year old Arab/Quarter Pony cross currently ridden hunter/jumper but has some western training as well. Phillip jumps 2'3 and is been ridden currently 2-3 times a week in a cross country type environment. Phillip is great with leg cues, neck reins (doesn't need constant direct pressure), and will work off of vocal commands. He can w/t/c bareback through trails, but needs an intermediate rider. <Here is where you would add comments about ground manners, clipping, loading ect..> Keep it short and to the point. Get them to come see your horse and you can talk more in depth about him there.
Paragraph 2 - Health
Phillip is UTD on all shots and coggins and <here is where you would talk about any special needs or soundness issues><end on a good note> Phillip is an easy keeper with great feet and is kept barefoot.
Paragraph 3 - Lease terms
Philip is offered as a free lease (recommended) to an intermediate rider only and is not for sale at this time. Lessee must provide a safe and loving home with in the state of Virginia preferably with-in a 50 mile radius.Lessee will be responsible for all board, farrier and veterinary cost during the lease. Lease length and other terms are negotiable.
Serious inquiries only please.
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Can you tell I'm anal about this? Good luck!