I've finally decided to post this in the critique section! I pretty much know what I did wrong, and I had my trainer there (seeing as it's her barn!), but it's always interesting to hear other people's opinions!
This was the first annual Dreamworks show! As you can tell we are far from hunters (placed 3rd).. haha, but we did this before the 3ft jumpers(which we won!)! My lines were sloppy, I let both of them get too strung out and I totally didn't ride. To #2 I got a long distance, but I think that was alright, I supported it enough to make it work. My hands have always been my biggest issue.. ANYWAY.. critique away!