Care to Critique? my riding...

(^ Click on the picture above to see video ^)
That's me riding Lilly. Any comments and critiques are welcome.

Excuse the light and shaky camera, lol

I think you should get a different video where there is more light, because it is very hard to see your position.

The camera person had very nice huming..... lol You asked to critique on your position so I will, not on your horse. Lol
You are alil hunchback after the second fence also leaning forward. Coming up to the jump you are leaning forward. Your horse is jumping alright, although lifting your hands up will help your horse flow over the jump. Nice job though!

Thanks, and yes, I do just adore the humming too. Lol.

I'll try your suggestions. I'll lift my hands, and sit back.. try not to lean forward. Thanks :)

And here's another video. I think it's with better light? I'd say.