Going across left from right i'll quickly run down what I see:
1. Over jumping and ahead of the motion without enough release.
2. Not much to critique but I *think* that I might be tilted to the left to much? Am I seeing things?
3. This picture was from our first show. I was in a weird habit were I would simply stand up - I can see that in this picture.
4. Bring my shoulders back.
5. Please rip apart this picture. I was in an awful habit of rounding my shoulders as she is built down hill and tended to pull me. Unfortunately I still have the habit so any suggestions would be helpful!
Thanks in advanced!