What kind of riding are aiming to do? The only reason I ask is you "perch" as you canter, which (to my understanding) is more acceptable for the Hunter crowd. You do have to be careful on not so honest horses with leaning/perching as you canter, imo. Some will take that as an opportunity to do an "About face!" ;)
You look like a very quiet rider and while I am far from a professional, you do appear to engage in two point about a stride out, which is a bit early... But you, again, are a quiet rider and doesn't appear to interfere with the horse. Just be careful engaging in two point so early, there are nasty ditchers out there that will wait until the last possible moment to duck on a jump and leave one in the dirt ;).
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