Aww, you both look lovely! You have a very nice leg position, that ties in well with your hips and shoulders. I agree about looking up as well, this will make for a much better ride. I find SO much of a difference if I keep my eyes up when I ride because for one thing, my horse is better able to anticipate where I am going and prepare for smoother circles and transitions. I like how you have soft hands, but it looks like your horse may be taking advantage of your light contact. I'm not saying you need more pressure, have just a bit more of a firmer hold, and lower your hands as well slightly. I notice your horse is turning his head a bit and this tells me he may be evading you, but its hard to tell. I would work on doing inside and outside bends with him, getting him soft and working on that bit.
Oh, and to add -- Magic has beautiful extension! With a bit more leg pressure and work through the hind end, his legs would look very impressive.