First off... I am stealing your horse. So freaking cute. What breed and name?
Now for you. The first picture is really hard to get much from because of the angle. It is clear that your toes turn out a little too much, so try to turn them in a little. It's great that your eyes are looking up and forward. That's exactly what you need to be doing.
The second picture... you are just kind of throwing yourself over the fence. This isn't a huge fence, you don't need to lay on your horses neck. Your lower leg has slipped back a little, this can be caused by weak calf muscles, you could try taking the stirrups off your saddle and doing some no stirrup work for a while. As far as your upper body, you need to come up off your horse. You have thrown yourself forward to the point where you are almost about to come in front of the saddle. Wait for your horse to jump, you don't have to jump for your horse. Jumping is easy, just go with the motion, you don't need to put in all that extra effort to try to fold. You also really don't need that big of a release. You seem like you really do know what you are doing, but you need to not try so hard because then you get ahead of yourself and over fold. These really are not that big of fences, you don't need to put that much effort into it to get over.
Overall I do think that you look good, and it looks like you have a good base and know what you need to do.... you just need to adjust it for the size fence you are going over.