hmm I couldn't edit it, so I'll put the rest here. And thank you, Misty's Girl!
My comments on Horse One:
I LOVE the way he is built, I wouldn't change a thing, except maybe fix his sway back a bit.
In the photos, she's two turning three in a few months. In the video she's three and was only U/S for two months. Don't critique my riding, its gotten terrible since I started training her! :P (oh and her mane now lays on the correct side! Theres a few where its laying on the left side.. I also don't have as many photos of her, so she may be harder to critique, for that sake there is a video too.
Photo One, Left Side
Photo Two, Right Side
(she is standing a little under herself in the front)
Photo Three, free walk/side
Photo Four, free trot
Photo Five, Right Side
(I hate this photo of her, btw, but its good for conformation purposes, I suppose.. She's not square, shoot me, and her neck looks funny here.. Her neck is a lot nicer in bridle, as you'll see for yourself.)
Photo Six, good shot from behind
Photo Seven, Parking Out.
Free Movement, Trot
Free Movement, Canter
Her conformation isn't initially impressive, but I think when you see her move, she's very impressive. That's what sold me on her. I went to see her, and they let her loose in a snowy arena, and she just snorted and trotted and cantered. She's got very big strides at the trot and canter for her petite frame! She MOVES! My least favorite thing about her is her shoulder/neck, but I think it looks great in leather, so I don't mind it as much. Otherwise, I think she is put together well, no flaws stick out at me, except her neck/shoulder.