Be as harsh as you want, cos I really want to improve... Oh and these pics are like 2 months old so I am slightly better now than I was in these pix... My steed is called Mate and he is not mine - He is the riding schools, and please don't critique him, only me, thanks!
I really like your leg contact in the last pic, in the first one, you could bring in your toes and put the stirrup on the ball of your foot. In the first one, you are gripping with your knees and as a result, you are tipping forward over the front of the pommel of the saddle nearly. Your arms are a liiiitle to straight and don't have much "give" in them. You could also bring your elbows in as well. In the first one also, relax and sit back a little
But other than that, I like youe leg contact and you look like you really love mate good luck and practice makes perfect!!!
I have attached a cartoon poster that is off a website with some things to remember in it that will help with your psoiton Its up on my wall lol.
hahah thanks :) and im much better now trust me lol but yeah :) hahah I guess I should say that was my first time riding Mate and I fell off him later that lesson when we were doing crosspoles lol he overjumps alot and I didnt know XD
When cantering, as in the third pic (pretty sure you are cantering lol) make sure you don't grip with your legs. Your lower leg is sliding up, bringing your heel up with it. Sit deep in the saddle, and think about 'growing tall'. This will help you sit the canter without gripping.
You really look like you enjoy riding, and are having fun. That is going to help you ride better, because relaxing and enjoying it solves so many problems :)
You leg needs to be back more, and keep your heels down. There needs to be more bend in your elbow. Try bringing your hands back towards you a little more, so that your upper arm is lying right by your sides.