Critique Oliver's Video!

This is just a warm up ride on Oliver but its raw: no lunging just the first few minutes after our streches, 10 minutes of trot work and this is what you got. I would really like to hear what you think of his movement and work ethic.

I know I have ALOT to work on myself. LOL Im finally getting the look up and bend your arms part...cant really tell from this video haha.

Please me harsh. I will get video this weekend of us in our lesson and postit so I can get the compare contrast thing going on.

He can be alot more put together and what not when I lunge him in side reins and do transtion work on the lunge line and then go into figure eights and bending lines undersaddle

Thanks

Sam

BUMPING!

Please. I have gone over the video alot, I can pick out many things I need to correct but I havnt had anyone tell me what they thinkof his movemnet, blance, or give me tips on how to help him.

PLEASE?!

Helllllllo?
Annnnnntone here ?