haha go california!!! Love it here... anyways..
First pic; really nice. Your leg has slipped back a bit, however I really like your leg from what I can see- your ankle is flexed yet relaxed, and you have an appropriate angle in your knee for hte size of jump you are doing. Your upper body is also very good- looking up and doing a very good short crest release.
Second picture; horse looks lovely. I would like to see your hands closer together, even if you are getting your horse in a frame. I would also like to see you turn your leg out so you foot is pointed out a little more.
Third picture; I can't really see this one.. haha
Forth picture; horse is very overbent, but I am assuming this was just a correction because you are fine in all the rest of hte picutures.
Fifth picture; REALLY nice. You can open your hip angle a little, because your butt should be a little closer to the saddle at this point in the jump. (i am just being really picky haha)
Sixth picture; don't you just love horses? :roll: haha