haha go california!!! love it here... anyways..
first pic; really nice. your leg has slipped back a bit, however i really like your leg from what i can see- your ankle is flexed yet relaxed, and you have an appropriate angle in your knee for hte size of jump you are doing. your upper body is also very good- looking up and doing a very good short crest release.
second picture; horse looks lovely. i would like to see your hands closer together, even if you are getting your horse in a frame. i would also like to see you turn your leg out so you foot is pointed out a little more.
third picture; i can't really see this one.. haha
forth picture; horse is very overbent, but i am assuming this was just a correction because you are fine in all the rest of hte picutures.
fifth picture; REALLY nice. you can open your hip angle a little, because your butt should be a little closer to the saddle at this point in the jump. (i am just being really picky haha)
sixth picture; don't you just love horses? :roll: haha