No Jumper, you don't need to fold more, leave your upper body. I like this, but your knee, lower leg, and feet are pointed outward and need to point straight. Make sure that you dont have an unessissary knee roll that is encouraging you to do this. I don't like knee rolls except for higher jumps. It looks like your horse may have over jumped this a smidge! Not a huge deal, they all do it at some point, but make sure he is not consistently doing this. Good job both of yall! We all have places where we can improve our jumping. Yall both have your eye up which is very important for your balance and situation awareness.