I usually read through everyone elses comments to not repost anything but somethings stick better when you've heard them 101 times!
1: Get those toes up and forward! They're lazer beams pointing at the horses ears!!
2: Look up over the jump
3: You're leaning over the jumps. This isn't only bad balance for you, but also your horses balance.
4: Amazing jumper for being trained by you but you need to seriously set your horse up for the jump. She has an amazing tuck but is over jumping most of the jumps. She's taking off too soon. Try to slow her strides down so she takes off at the right spot.
5: Beautiful horse! Amazing rider! Great pictures!!
:) Hope I helped a little!