Comment on seedy toe – generally I take the wall back to the white line until this issue is resolved.
Please remember I am posting these comments without seeing the SOLE and the back. Limited comments that must be taken with a grain of salt, OK?
Near foot – toe could have been backed up more. Looks like heel needs to come back as well.
2nd pic – I would have come back a tidge more here on the toes as well;
3rd and 4th pics – you have much more work to do here.. I hope Barefoothooves looks at this pic because I think there is more going on here than just the trim. The hoof is definitely stretched forward – toe back more and heel way back more. This one is trickier and I would love to see better pics on this guy. I think BFH would also before she would comment. If you have pics of what you started out with, that might help too.
5th and 6th – I think these look OK, but it’s hard to see completely.
So, in general, I think you can come back on the toes more. Heels maybe and probably more work in the quarters and more of a roll, but it's awfully hard to tell without more pics from the bottom. Use the internet as a resource and print out photos you take of the horses feet -- draw lines on them to "see" better. That helped me alot and still does. Look at the soles and draw lines there too.
Good luck and keep posting! I am nowhere near an expert, but Barefoothooves is terrific and lots of us will guide you as best we can. It's not the same and never as good as being there, but its something!
Look on the 'net for barefoot trimmers / discussion boards, etc... you will probably be able to find someone who will host a clinic if you can gather up 10 people or so. Or try to group up with other owners that want to be barefoot. Maybe you can get someone out that will do 10 or 15 horses instead of 3??