Thanks so much! I'll definitely try to work on my upper body and my legs. I rode more often in the summer and gained some nice toned legs, but since school started I've only been going once a week for lessons and have lost some of my muscle, which is quite unfortunate.
And the horse I'm riding in those videos is called Daquery, Daq for short. He's a big lug, and definitely a great horse all around.
You look really nice and relaxed. I just think you should sit up taller and bring your shoulders back. And try not to pump with your upper body so much. Also tighten your reins a little and bring your hands up and bend you elbows a little bit more.
First video, horse is looking to the outside when coming around the corners. Make sure you get him bending around the corners. You want to be able to see his inside eyes eyelashes.
In the second video, when you went to go pick up the canter to go to your jump, your horse was looking to the outside. Where you picked up your canter as well, didnt give you much room to establish a nice steady pace. You also cut the corner going to the fence so you didnt come in square, causing you to have to correct your straightness between the line. Second corner, you cut in instead of using the whole arena, and your horse is again looking to the outside. You turned about a stride too soon, so again you took the first jump in the second line at an angle and then had to correct it.
It looks like you arent really getting out of the saddle into a two-point position either, but just standing up in the stirrups. They might be a tad too long for jumping.
So: come to your fences SQUARE with a well established canter. Use your corners! Hunter judges love horses that go allllll the way into the corner. Be straight between the lines...your horse always drifts to the outside, so put some outside leg on him.
I do agree, I need the work on pulling my upper body back. My reins are a little slack, and I will try to improve that.
Also, my two point is definitely off. My spots for jumps actually have been getting a bit sloppy for a the past few weeks. I used to have a big problem with that, and it was gradually corrected over the course of a few months. It looks like I might need a bit of a refresher in the same way that I corrected it last time: counting each stride so I know my perfect spot.
And yes, he was definitely drifting and cutting some of the corners. I'll try to put some more leg on him, and some more force behind my cues.
It appears that you are resting your knuckles on the horse's neck as a way of keeping them still. As a result, when the horse lengthens and shortens his frame with every stride, the reins also lengthen and shorten. This creates an inconsistent communication with your horse.
You need to get those knuckles away from the neck and learn to use your shoulders and elbows to absorb the movement of your horse's frame. Every stride should have your shoulders and elbows moving. Have someone hold the reins near the bit. Have them move reins move front and back, as if the horse were moving. See how much movement your elbows and shoulders must do to keep the same contact on the reins at all times. Keep a slight pull on the reins so that you can feel the bit and the horse's head move.