Better position, but your leg is still slipping back and you're jumping ahead. In those pics titled 13 months later, try shortening your stirrups a hole. At the halt, stand straight up in the stirrups, keep your lower leg at the girth with heels down. Then put the rest of your body into 2 point position without moving your lower leg. You will have to play with your hip angle and shoulder position to find your balance. Once you find it, canter in that position for as long as you can hold it. Put down ground poles and canter over them in 2 point making sure that you don't fall forward or back if you horse takes a weird step. Practice that position until your legs fall off and then go back fences and lots of grid work. Gymnastics are great. They let your horse take care of the jumping and all you have to do in concentrate on holding your position and not jumping ahead. Sorry if I wrote a book!