overall you guys seem to get along pretty well. one thing i notice is jumping ahead, which was definitely exaggerated when he took the close spot to that oxer (you did save yourself by keeping your eyes up though :) ). trot poles to a jump or another gymnastic can help you get the feel for proper timing by going through and just holding your 2pt letting the horses jump just push you into position. it will also help you hold your lower leg more still. other than the little slip i do like your leg though, you keep your heels down well and you can see your weight sinking down in canter.
another thing that stuck out to me was when you first start cantering you keep your elbows really stiff and your hands kind of high, this seems to improve as you keep going though and your elbows soften and hands go down, just something to be aware of.
i think you guys make an excellent pair and seem to have a great rythym.
off topic: do you like your riding vest? i have one of the sturdier ones for xc but was thinking of getting one like yours for stadium!
My mare= My life <3