Originally Posted by blackandyellow
You look really forward and uncomfortable. In a lot of the photos you are either looking down or have your eyes closed, I can't tell which. Your leg has slipped back a great deal and you look altogether very unbalanced.
I didn't see her looking down in a single picture... or with her eyes closed. I don't think you look "very" unbalanced either. I do agree you need to bring your leg forward though, and you seem to be a bit ahead of the jump. Otherwise you look good, I think!