Not a bad round. The only thing I really noticed was on jump 2 and 3 ( i think) you jumped up on your horse's neck early.... it looked like you picked a spot and he went with a different one. It was much more obvious on jump 3.
Your horse does appear to drag you down the lines a little. Remember to stay sitting up and back so he doesn't get on his forehand. Really it didn't look bad at all.
If your horse says no, you either asked the wrong question or asked the question wrong
And God took a handful of southerly wind, blew His breath over it and created the horse