I'm not very good at this BUT I think you look very good. You have a good hand position, you back isnt hunched and your leg looks good. The horse looks good 2! I might be wrong but I think you look good. :P
Thank you! I think this is one of my best positions in a long time. I do know that I need to keep my hands closed and put my heels down a bit more, but its way better than I used to be since I used to jump ahead ALL the time.
You do look good! Though it does look like your hands are resting on your horses neck, and you seem to have piano hands. Your leg seems abit far back, and you should turn in your toes. But other than that, you look great! :)
I know this is a critique thing but would you tell me what you mean by piano hands? And i'm not sure... but I think you need ur heals a little more down and ur hands a little more up.. hehe correct me if i'm wrong n.n'
I don't really like your leg position, honestly. To me you seem to be gripping with your knees, which has made your lower leg swing backward slightly thus tipping you forward onto your horses neck. Yes, a short crest release is meant to help support you but that doesn't mean it's ALL that supports you. One thing that I think will help that lower leg is putting those heels down. When you really sink down into your heels you'll be able to support yourself without leaning on your horse's neck and pinching with your knees. I really like how you're looking ahead to the next jump and that your back is nice and flat however. Just remember, heels down! That should really fix most of your leg issues.
Your definitely gripping with your knee which has caused your lower leg to slip back. Also your hands should be a little farther up the neck. You look a little scrunched up and tight. Sink your weight down into your heels over the jump and not your knee and hands a little more forward and you'll be looking great! Also hard to critique from one jump though since this could have just been an off jump for you.