Nicely built horse. A little steep at the shoulder, but a strong looking shoulder. Hip angle is steep but coupling is wide (where pelvis meets the back) . Hocks are low and knees too, but a bit tied in behind the knee. Hock is nice bone.
Pasterns a wee bit long but the angle of them is very good. The neck shows a bit of overdevelopment of the under neck muscles and might indicate a horse that runs with his head in the aire and braces against the bit?
Looks like a very sturdy horse. Love his big feet.
Ok your post for a critique is very confusing. I didn't realize you posted the original post and had 2 seperate horses as they look similar to each other if you are not paying attention and just thought it was the same horse
On the first horse:
Back looks longer than what I like, also appears a bit weak to me, but that's just my opinion.
Underside of neck quite developed.
Hard to see back legs, but looks fairly straightish through the hocks and stifle.
More upright shoulder
Nice looking horse allround though.
More bend to the hocks.
Neck seems less inverted
I like both of them and I am sure with muscling and all that they will shine up a treat.