Please don't critique my horse, just myself.
A few things I already know:
-My hands. I've had a problem since the beginning of fall with keeping my hands level and not tipping them forward.
-Leaning forward. Usually more at the canter than at the trot, but all the same. I think the second video is reasonably better than what it was before, but I'm constantly double checking to see if I'm too far forward.
-Rocking myself. I don't know if this is as awful as I see it, but I notice at the canter I really rock back and forth. Now for me, that's just how I keep my butt in the saddle, but I'm wondering if that's something I should change?
Hmm... not really. Tear me to shreds!