First, I want to say he is beautiful! Looks like you both had fun, which to me is the most important part of showing (and riding!). My only critique is to raise your hands a little- right now they look like they are resting on his withers, they need to be above them. Also, your feet are turned out a little far- looks like you are gripping with the back of your calf instead of the 'inside'? Wow, I'm terrible at explaining, so I'm going to stop, hopefully someone else can help. (: Keep riding & having fun!