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post #1 of 5 Old 06-16-2011, 08:15 PM Thread Starter
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post #2 of 5 Old 06-17-2011, 12:14 AM
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I really like it!! It looks good overall in my opinion. I would maybe make the font bigger, and add more pictures. I always love pictures. :) I looks great though!
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post #3 of 5 Old 06-17-2011, 05:40 AM
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The website itself appears to be good. Adequate for what you want, but nothing spectacular either. It does the job.

Some of the photos seem a tad unprofessional. The kid for sale seems to be standing in a pile of manure, which attracted the eye a lot quicker than the goat lol.

In the links, I would group the links by topic. Horses, goats, horses and goats.

You say you offer beginner lessons, but have no mention of the facilities that you offer these lessons in. Pictures would also be good.

I would change Phillip's breed. Everyone is going to call you out on it, with good reason. He isn't a pure Arabian, he can't possibly be. You need to list him as a cross, even though that is doubtful too. I know you think that has little to do with your website, but this is your professional online presence, you need to come across as honest and educated.

Mods, grant me the serenity to see the opinions I cannot change, courage to change the ones that should change, and the wisdom to spot the trolls.
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post #4 of 5 Old 06-17-2011, 05:01 PM Thread Starter
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I thought I changed his breed, maybe not on his link. I will fix that right away.

As for selling the goat - I know I need pictures of her. She's 9 weeks old now and those were probably taken at 4/5 weeks old. Thank you everyone. Anymore comments?
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post #5 of 5 Old 06-17-2011, 05:03 PM Thread Starter
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Oh, she isn't standing in poop. She's standing on a tree stump.
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