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        11-19-2011, 01:15 AM
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    2 poems i wrote :d

    Two Poems I wrote, hope you like :)

    WE WERE MATES, A TRUE BLUE TEAM
    BEING WITH YOU, WAS LIKE BEING IN A DREAM
    BUT NOW YOUR GONE, AND IíM ALONE
    BECAUSE THE LORD HAS CALLED YOU HOME
    AND NOW IíM LOST, OF WHAT TO DO
    ĎCAUSE LIFE JUST ISNíT GOOD, IF ITíS NOT SHARED WITH YOU
    SO NOW, TOMORROW AND FOREVER I WILL REGRET
    THE TIME SPENT AWAY FROM YOU, AND NEVER WILL I FORGET
    TOGETHER WE COULD BEAT THEM ALL
    AND NOW YOU LIE BEHIND HEAVENS WALL
    AND IíLL KEEP THINKING OF YOU MY FRIEND
    AND ALTHOUGH APART, OUR LOVE WONT END
    SO UNTIL THE DAY I SEE YOUR FACE
    IíLL REMAIN IN MY PLACE
    AND IíLL KEEP DREAMING UNTIL WE ARE ONE
    AND NOW MY ODE TO YOU IS DONE
     
     
     
     
     
    As I sat astride his chestnut back
    Sitting on gleaming, freshly oiled tack
    His blackened hooves and perfect mane
    A horse like this was destined for fame
    and then the world will have to see
    Although no one will be more proud then me
    And the crowds will cheer from the wooden deck
    AND THEYíLL take the WINNERS wreath and place it around your neck
         
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        11-19-2011, 09:47 PM
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    Foal
    Oh I really like it. Great job
         
        11-29-2011, 12:21 AM
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    Foal
    Good poems... I can feel the emotion in them. Keep writing!
         
        11-29-2011, 12:57 AM
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    Thankyou
         

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