Brighteye's is a terrible poet.

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    05-04-2009, 11:11 PM
Green Broke
Brighteye's is a terrible poet.

I have a school assignment where I have to write a poem *Ugh*, so I thought everyone else here would like to read the world's worst horse poem.

A Trail Horse's Prayer

Let me be willing, let me be strong,
Though the load is heavy and the trail is long;
Let my soul be cheerful and my heart be pure;
Let my gaint be easy and my steps be sure.

(I need something here, just can't think of anything...)
I lift up my prayer to the God they say
Was also born on a bed of hay.
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    05-04-2009, 11:28 PM
Green Broke
Holy F-in' rule breaker, Batman, a double post!

This verision of the last part sounds a little better to me...

I lift my prayer to the God
Whom many faithful say
Was, just as I, born on beds of hay.

(Just keepin' it simple )
    05-04-2009, 11:53 PM
I like it, that's really cute.

What about, for the end?

I lift my prayer to the God
Whom many faithful say
Was born just like me
On a soft bed of hay.

I think that has a little bit more rhythm maybe? But I'm not a poet either, ha ha.

Also, love you name. Don't know if it's a reference to the artist, but I love Conor Oberst. :]
    05-05-2009, 12:22 AM
Green Broke
I'm surprised you picked up my reference, I think you're the first one who's said anything

And you're a way better poet then me, that does sound a lot more rhythmic
    05-05-2009, 12:27 AM
Ha ha. I love Bright Eyes... HE is an incredible poet.

And thanks. Ha ha.

really bad poem

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