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    View Poll Results: Should I continue to write?
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        07-20-2011, 01:07 PM
    Oh sorry! I didn't mean to copy it, Im just going to go on with my story.
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        07-20-2011, 01:19 PM
    Slowly, the world came into view again. Trying to remember where I was, I looked around. I spotted my trainer sitting on a chair next to me in the lounge. Calling her name, I cautiously got up.

    "What happened?" I asked her. Answering my question with a question she replied "Do you remember anything?". Suddenly the day's events flooded into my brain and before I even asked, she had answered my new question. "The horse is in the barn".

    Rushing into the barn, I spotted Apollo's majestic black head poking out the back stall door. Walking over, I pulled out a carrot from my back pocket and fed it to him. His beautiful brown eyes peered out at me, and he nuzzled my shoulder as if apologizing for all the problems he had caused. Then and there, I decided to start training him the next day.
        07-20-2011, 01:40 PM
    Green Broke
    Oh! I wasn't accusing you, plus that last post proved me wrong
        07-27-2011, 01:58 PM
    Green Broke
    I'm LOVING it!! I like to write too, but you are a much better writer than I am! Defenately keep writing it maybe you'll be an author when you grow up and you'll make LOADS of dollars from this one book when you get it published and then after you make this one and get lots of money, you'll make another one and get lots MORE money and then you can get a horse and build a barn and do whatever you wanna do I'm just rambling on :p
        08-28-2011, 09:00 PM
    After a good nights sleep, I woke to find the roads un-usable. Turning on the t.v, the weather reported a storm and suggested staying indoors. Dissapointed, I called my trainer to let her know I would not be able to make today and to start the training without me.

    Deciding to go back to bed and salvage the opportunity to get some more sleep, I closed my eyes and drifted off. I awoke to a feeling of uneasiness. Thinking it was nothing I looked out the window to find the snow had piled on.'Apollo', the thought flashed through my mind and as I headed for the phone to check up on him, I got a call from my trainer.

    "Hello?" I answered. She spoke to words "It's Apollo", I didn't give her time to explain before hanging up. As I got changed I started thinking up ways to get to the barn.
        08-28-2011, 09:18 PM
    Green Broke
    Ooh!! Sounds exiting!! At first I thought she meant "Hello, this is Apollo speaking" and i'm like 'wow no wonder she hung up' :p but then I thought, 'okay well this is a trainer, that would be kinda odd...' then I reread it and I get it now :p So glad you kept writing!
        08-29-2011, 02:44 PM
    Just as I was zipping my jacket, my dad called me into the garage. "Whats up? Im kind of in a hurry here." I asked rushing to put my shoes on. His face was full of excitement so I walked over to where he was curious of what it could be. He moved to the side to reveil a snowmobile.

    "OH MY GOSH DAD!!! Where did you find that?" I questioned as I hopped on. "Well, we've always had one to use for emergencies and your trainer called me to explain that you had to get over to the barn right away, so I thought, why not?" he replied. He got on and we headed over to the barn.
        08-29-2011, 02:48 PM
    Green Broke
    Haha and the adventure begins :p

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