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        09-27-2013, 05:25 PM
      #31
    Weanling
    Eyrss stared at the fire, wasn't sure if she was excited or dreaded school she wanted a friend but she was still worried about meeting new people.
    Her Granfather got up to stoke the fire then he turn around to face her Your Grandma put your uniform on your bed and your shoes.
    He returned to his chair and continued you'll have to catch the bus at 7:35 am oh and be up at about 5:00 so you can look after Aspen as well.
    Eryss nodded.
    Anything you want to know just ask your Grandma.
    Her Grandpa saw she was tired and wasn't going to take all in so he left the subject alone.
         
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        09-27-2013, 05:26 PM
      #32
    Weanling
    Sorry about bad punctuation
         
        09-28-2013, 04:43 AM
      #33
    Weanling
    A chilled morning breeze blew the door shut, Eyrss turned and looked at the door for a second before wrapping her scarf tighter around her neck, she was too cold and tired to care if she woke anybody else. She slowly trudged over to the stable, she walked in and emerged out a few minutes later carrying Aspens breakfast. She yawned as she unclipped the chain that held Aspens pen shut, it feel and clinked on icy metal bar. Eyrss pushed the gate open, turned, and shut it again. Eyrss dropped the bucket full of food on the ground and stretched as the sun began to emerge over the horizon. She turned and her chest tightened, Aspen stood on the other side of the pen, his head low and eyes drained of life.
    "What's wrong boy, are you hurt?" She exclaimed as she approached her horse. He lifted his head to greet her, but it proved to be too much of an effort as he dropped it down again. He was not acting like himself.
    Eyrss hurried to the gate, bolted out and ran as fast as her stiff legs would take her.
    "He will be fin Eyrss, now get ready, the bus arrives in 10 minutes, you don't want to be late on your first day do you?"
    "No mum" Eyrss spook with her hushed voice.
    Eyrss flung her bag onto her shoulder and stepped out the door, it had been so long since she had been to school, and she wasnt ready to go back yet either.
         
        09-28-2013, 04:44 AM
      #34
    Weanling
    Sorry for the spelling mistakes, im writing this on an iPad.
         
        09-28-2013, 07:08 PM
      #35
    Weanling
    Eyrss picked up her bag as the bus pulled up,she took a deap breath and climb up the steps onto the bus.
    As she walked to an empty seat she felt everyone's eyes on her.
         
        09-29-2013, 03:36 PM
      #36
    Yearling
    Eryss practically leaped of the bus as it pulled up to her house after school and dashed up the long tree-lined driveway to the barn. Her grandpa walked out of the barn as Eryss approached, clapping his hands together to remove the dust that coated them. "Where's Aspen? Is okay? What happened? I was so worried all day! Where is he?" she demanded all in one breath. Her grandpa merely smiled, trying not to laugh "Eryss, calm down he's in his stall. It was just a case of very mild colic, we walked him around and gave him some psyllium. He should be fine for now but the vet is on her way out just to be sure." When Eryss still looked unconvinced he sighed and turned back to the barn "come see for yourself, then". Nervously Eryss followed him into the barn and to Aspens stall, where her gelding stood looking much better then that morning. With a small nicker Aspen walked over to the door, dropped his head over the top and looked at Eryss steadily, demanding pets.
         
        09-30-2013, 12:32 AM
      #37
    Weanling
    Eyrss breathed a sigh of relief, I'm just going to get changed and I'll be back she told Aspen who was trying to undo to latch on his stall door.
    Here you go boy she said as she filled his food trough, Aspen walked over to her and nibbled on her sleeve.
    The vet had been and said Aspen was fine just needed to be watched closely for a couple of days.
    Eryss come and help get dinner ready called her mum.
    Okay coming she yelled back.
    Night Aspen cya in the morning she said in his ear she ran back to the house.
         
        09-30-2013, 01:05 AM
      #38
    Weanling
    Eyrss rushed through her dinner before heading up stairs and lying on her bed. She reached over and grabbed one of her horse magazines and began to read. She read articles on girls in pony clubs, gymkhanas, trail rides and everything that she longed to do.
    "I wish I could do that" mumbled Eyrss as she stared at a picture of a girl jumping her horse over what seemed to be higher than her. Eyrss stared at her wall, blinked and then realised.
    She leapt of her bed and walked to her window, she pushed it open and breathed in the fresh air, it sent a chill down her back. She gazed over towards the stables, she shut her eyes and heard a horse in the distant.
    She knew what she wanted to do, she wanted to ride, but not just any horse, she wanted to ride Aspen. But he wasnt even broken to ride yet, but he seemed so sweet, would it be that bad if she just sat on his back for a second.
    Eyrss shook her head, this required more thought, she shut her window and sat in bed, closed her eyes and began to think. Within only a few minutes she was asleep, and dreaming about riding Aspen.
         
        09-30-2013, 07:07 PM
      #39
    Yearling
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Clydesdales    
    Eyrss breathed a sigh of relief, I'm just going to get changed and I'll be back she told Aspen who was trying to undo to latch on his stall door.
    Here you go boy she said as she filled his food trough, Aspen walked over to her and nibbled on her sleeve.
    The vet had been and said Aspen was fine just needed to be watched closely for a couple of days.
    Eryss come and help get dinner ready called her mum.
    Okay coming she yelled back.
    Night Aspen cya in the morning she said in his ear she ran back to the house.
    you need to use quotation marks, and actual words IE not "cya"
         
        09-30-2013, 08:05 PM
      #40
    Weanling
    Thank you samstead will try and remember when to put them
         

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