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Constructive Criticism please

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    05-06-2012, 02:17 PM
Please continue with this :)
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    05-28-2012, 12:03 AM
Please write more! I am loving this story!
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    01-12-2013, 02:38 PM
This is a good story. Why didn't you finish it.
    01-12-2013, 04:54 PM
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My home computer crashed so I haven't had a chance. Should I keep going?
    01-12-2013, 06:15 PM
Yes you should. Its a very good story.
    01-12-2013, 07:26 PM
Oh my goodness, I just found this thread right now, lol. Your story is amazing so far! Please keep going!
    09-23-2014, 02:38 AM
Please keep writing, I am enjoying it!!
    12-01-2014, 09:51 PM
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Hauling a loaded horse trailer with a burned out clutch and a sprained ankle in the dead of night hadn't been one of his brightest ideas. Holding a hot cup of coffee while shifting the gears was also not one of his best ideas. Bobby cursed as hot liquid sloshed across his hand. Using his elbow to steer, he switched the cup to his other hand and forced the sticky gear into place with a loud grinding noise. He wiped his hand dry on his jeans and cursed some more. He was only an hour from his home town at this point and was beginning to wonder if he should have called ahead. The house would be unlocked....

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