Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Ontario, Canada
• Horses: 0
This is really good! Just some spelling and grammatical errors to fix up (I apologize, but I'm a stickler for that). I love all the backstories and how detailed your writing is! Keep 'em coming!...Just my opinion, but I'd say with the writing style and type of story it is then it would be typical for you to keep writing from Lacey's point of view. Not saying you have to though, at all.
Last edited by ilyTango; 03-28-2010 at 05:28 PM.