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        01-16-2010, 10:38 PM
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    "Earth to Lacey." Lacey jerked.
    "What?" She asked. She hung the hose on the rack and took a sweat scraper from the hanging basket nearby. "I wasn't listenting." She mumbled quickly making sure the horse was dry enough to return to his stall.
    Vicky made an inaudible sound.
    "I said are you going to braid my horse for the show this weekend?" I hate you. Lacey thought to herself but instead the answer she gave was that she'd be happy to braid her horses mane for the show. The show that she wouldn't get to ride in because she didn't own a horse of her own and because she couldn't afford to. This show she would have to work the in gate for Mr. Cutter. She wanted so badly to tell him how much it would mean to her to do more then just a local show. She knew better. This man gave her so much, lessons in exchange for a little bit of work in the afternoons during the school year, his daughters hand me down clothes and gear and his praise. Ok, maybe not his praise, but it's not like he offered it to just anyone. In all actuallity, she'd never heard him praise anyone before.
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        01-16-2010, 10:39 PM
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    Ugh! I just sat here and typed several paragraphs straight into the quick reply because I didn't e-mail the story home so I don't have it on this computer and I hit some key that made me go back! OOOOOH! Mad now.
        01-19-2010, 06:10 PM
    Ooh noooo! Well, it continues to be really good But howw frustrating is that!? I dislike computers... a whole lot!
        01-27-2010, 04:37 PM
    Originally Posted by HollyLolly    
    Ooh noooo! Well, it continues to be really good But howw frustrating is that!? I dislike computers... a whole lot!
    muuahahaa! I have to agree with you!!! Computers are crazy things.... make you wanna pull your hair out sometimes!! But they're also some VERY cool things.... like allowing access to Horse Forum I hate computers... I love computerss...

    And btw, farm pony, keep up the good story! It's amazing.... I am totally hoooked!
        02-02-2010, 06:49 AM
    Green Broke
    Excellent story! Really enjoying it, you are truly an excellent writer.
        03-26-2010, 04:42 PM
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    Should I do this entire storyline from her point of view?
        03-28-2010, 05:23 PM
    This is really good! Just some spelling and grammatical errors to fix up (I apologize, but I'm a stickler for that). I love all the backstories and how detailed your writing is! Keep 'em coming!...Just my opinion, but I'd say with the writing style and type of story it is then it would be typical for you to keep writing from Lacey's point of view. Not saying you have to though, at all.
        03-28-2010, 06:06 PM
    Dang I wanted to hear more of this story..this story is sooooooooooooooooo good. I couldn't believe it, but once I started reading I couldn't stop!
        03-28-2010, 08:00 PM
    Great story so far...i hope you continue to post more!
        03-28-2010, 09:26 PM
    More more more more more!

    Please :)

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