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post #41 of 145 Old 04-19-2010, 11:18 PM
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I agree it works best from just her point of view
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post #42 of 145 Old 04-19-2010, 11:39 PM
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that is such a good story but I think you should stay in her POV :)
Can't wait to read more
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post #43 of 145 Old 06-25-2010, 04:20 PM Thread Starter
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"Earth to Lacey." Lacey jerked.
"What?" She asked. She hung the hose on the rack and took a sweat scraper from the hanging basket nearby. "I wasn't listening." She mumbled quickly making sure the horse was dry enough to return to his stall.
Vicky made an inaudible sound.
"I said are you going to braid my horse for the show this weekend?" I hate you. Lacey thought to herself but instead the answer she gave was that she'd be happy to braid her horses mane for the show; the show that she wouldn't get to ride in because she didn't own a horse of her own and because she couldn't afford it. The show she would watch from the sidelines as she worked the in gate. She wanted so badly to tell Mr. Cutter how much it would mean to her to do more then just a local show. She knew better. This man gave her so much, lessons in exchange for a little bit of work in the afternoons during the school year, his daughters hand me down clothes and gear and his praise. Ok, maybe not his praise, but it's not like he offered it to just anyone. In all actuality, she'd never heard him praise any two legged creature before. No, he saved that for the four-legged beasts that graced his land.

The next afternoon Lacey perched herself on the top rail overlooking the arena. She had taken her English lesson earlier in the day so when her shift had ended there was nothing left to do but wait for her mother, who was running late. Again. When the “diva squad” had gone on their afternoon trail ride with Chase Cutter leading the way, Morgan had a great spectacle out of tacking up. That tiny English saddle had suddenly become just to heavy for her to heft over that giant horses back. She’d needed help with her bridle as well, even though her horse dropped his head and opened his mouth for her. She’d giggled and flung her hair from one shoulder to the next. To Lacey, the show had felt a lot like fingers on a chalk board, she couldn’t get her chores done fast enough. As soon as she could, she’d left the barn, but her curiosity had gotten the best of her so she climbed onto the split rail fence and pretended to find great interest in watching Jake’s reining lesson.
She gazed longingly across the pasture, watching the group of riders disappear over the horizon. She’d love to climb aboard a horse and let it run. Just close her eyes and let it run. Turning her attention back to the lesson in front of her she found herself intrigued by the gentleness and the ease to which Jake controlled the stocky horse beneath him. He’d pulled his baseball cap down low but she could still see wisps of brown hair across his forehead. He spun the glistening bay several times in one direction and then with almost invisible commands halted. Sitting for a moment he caressed the horses mane and spoke silent praises. Suddenly the horse spun in the opposite direction, it was as if the two were dancing in a world of their own. It was amazing.

"Be a best friend, tell the truth, and overuse I love you
Go to work, do your best, don't outsmart your common sense
Never let your prayin knees get lazy
And love like crazy"
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post #44 of 145 Old 07-17-2010, 06:37 AM
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more more more more more more more more more. PLEASE?????
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post #45 of 145 Old 09-24-2010, 11:07 AM Thread Starter
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ok... working it...

"Be a best friend, tell the truth, and overuse I love you
Go to work, do your best, don't outsmart your common sense
Never let your prayin knees get lazy
And love like crazy"
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post #46 of 145 Old 10-02-2010, 03:34 AM
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This is great! And yup, keep it in Lacey's point of view. It can get confusing if it keeps switchin around.
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post #47 of 145 Old 10-03-2010, 06:52 AM
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More (:

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post #48 of 145 Old 12-14-2010, 10:56 AM Thread Starter
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The next afternoon Lacey perched herself on the top rail overlooking the arena. She had taken her English lesson earlier in the day so when her shift had ended there was nothing left to do but wait for her mother, who was running late. Again. The “diva squad” had gone on their afternoon trail ride with Chase Cutter leading the way. Morgan had made a great spectacle out of tacking up. That tiny English saddle had suddenly become just too heavy for her to heft over that giant of a horse’s back. She’d needed help with her bridle as well, even though her horse dropped his head and opened his mouth for her. She’d giggled and flung her hair from one shoulder to the next. To Lacey, the show had felt a lot like fingers on a chalk board, she couldn’t get her chores done fast enough. As soon as she could, she’d left the barn, but her curiosity had gotten the best of her so she climbed onto the split rail fence and pretended to find great interest in watching Jake’s reining lesson.
She gazed longingly across the pasture, watching the group of riders disappear over the horizon. She’d love to climb aboard a horse and let it run. Just close her eyes and let it run. Standing there with her nose turned toward the sky she could almost feel the wind against her face. With a sigh she turned her attention back to the lesson in front of her she found herself intrigued by the gentleness and the ease to which Jake controlled the stocky horse beneath him. He’d pulled his baseball cap down low but she could still see wisps of brown hair across his forehead. He spun the glistening bay several times in one direction and then with almost invisible commands halted the horse. Sitting for a moment he caressed the horses mane and spoke silent praises. Suddenly the horse spun in the opposite direction several times before circling at a slow lope that gained speed as the circles widened. It was as if the two were dancing in a world of their own to a music that only the horse and rider could hear. It was amazing.

"Be a best friend, tell the truth, and overuse I love you
Go to work, do your best, don't outsmart your common sense
Never let your prayin knees get lazy
And love like crazy"
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post #49 of 145 Old 12-21-2010, 03:49 PM
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Fab!!! Keep it comin'

Cowgirl: A better-looking cowboy with brains.

Life is short!! Hug your horse!!
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post #50 of 145 Old 12-21-2010, 04:40 PM Thread Starter
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She gazed longingly across the pasture, watching the group of riders disappear over the horizon. She’d love to climb aboard a horse and let it run. Just close her eyes and let it run. Standing there with her nose turned toward the sky she could almost feel the wind against her face. With a sigh she turned her attention back to the lesson in front of her she found herself intrigued by the gentleness and the ease to which Jake controlled the stocky horse beneath him. He’d pulled his baseball cap down low but she could still see wisps of brown hair across his forehead. He spun the glistening bay several times in one direction and then with almost invisible commands halted the horse. Sitting for a moment he caressed the horses mane and spoke silent praises. Suddenly the horse spun in the opposite direction several times before circling at a slow lope that gained speed as the circles widened. It was as if the two were dancing in a world of their own to music that only the horse and rider could hear. It was amazing.
Lacey was surprised to feel her heart skip a beat when the elder Cutter boy removed his hat to wipe the sweat from his forehead. Maybe it was because the two brothers looked so much alike. She certainly had nothing in common with the Jake. Not only was he nearly two years older than her, he was already out of high school. He had rushed to graduate two semesters early his senior year so that he could take time off to prepare for the National Youth Reining Championships. This would be his last year to show in that age category and he had dreams of becoming a professional trainer. He was attending the community college in hopes to someday run his own business and to make a name for himself in the horse world. Lacey had dreams of just riding a horse in the warm-up ring at a breed show, and maybe someday riding in just one class and maybe even placing. They were completely different people. She shook her head, she wasn’t interested in a man residing in a boys body. She wanted danger and excitement; she wanted a guy like Chase Cutter. Wild and untamed. And madly in love with her.
But more than that, she wanted a horse of her own. With a sigh she climbed down from her perch on the fence and headed towards the training barn. There was a liver chestnut filly that had been brought in from the fields a few weeks earlier to begin her training. The plan had been to enter her in a reining Futurity but she had grown too tall and lanky over the winter. She was built like a western pleasure horse and didn’t have the agility she would need for a career in reining. She had over hear Mr. Cutter and Hank talking about her last week. They had been discussing options, sell her now, put a few hours into her, use her for lessons, in the end Hank had talked Mr. Cutter into training her as an all-arounder. He felt she had the mind and the movement to excel in trail, equitation, hunter under saddle, and western pleasure. It amazed Lacey how a man could look into the eyes of a horse, watch her play in a pasture for a few minutes, and come to such a conclusion, but Hank rarely made a mistake. He’d been known to bring home some of the ugliest animals from auctions and backyard farms. People used to laugh when he unloaded horses, now they just wait to see the beauty that he always found within them.
The little red mare nickered when she neared her stall. She had learned the sound of her steps and knew there would soon be a peppermint treat.

"Be a best friend, tell the truth, and overuse I love you
Go to work, do your best, don't outsmart your common sense
Never let your prayin knees get lazy
And love like crazy"
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