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post #1 of 17 Old 04-24-2013, 03:34 PM Thread Starter
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Don't laugh! Horse Poem.

Ooooookkkkaaaaaayyyy.
I wrote a poem about my horse, and please please please don't laugh, it was my first attempt. I'm only showing you guys this because I'll never met you. So here goes.

Borrowed Wings

Toby's hooves lend me wings,
I love his horsey smell.
And when his head he brings
Closer to my chest
All my worries are out to rest.

Toby puts other horses to shame
With his golden coat and mane.
I love him dearly with all my heart,
And I hope we never have to part.

This poem comes from deep within a young girl's stolen heart.
For this little girl
Could not write verses
Without getting a headache fit to send her to the nurse's.

Toby's beauty has inspired
This young girl
To write about her beloved friend
Whose hooves lend her wings.
- Tobysthebesthorseever

Don't laugh!!! Please!!!
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post #2 of 17 Old 05-04-2013, 11:00 AM Thread Starter
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I wanted someone to say something!!!! But maybe it was so bad....no one had anything to say except to laugh....?

Pshh....I don't procrastinate, I just do unimportant things VERY productively!

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post #3 of 17 Old 05-07-2013, 08:19 AM Thread Starter
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Pleeeeeaaaassssseeeeee I want to know how other people think it is!!! Is it good? Is it bad? PLEASE!!!

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post #4 of 17 Old 05-07-2013, 08:43 AM
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Not laughing at all

Any poem, prose or story written from the heart is good. You wrote this from the heart and your love for your horse shows through in your words.

Sometimes I wrestle with my demons. Sometimes we just snuggle.
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post #5 of 17 Old 05-07-2013, 09:45 AM Thread Starter
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Yay!!!! Someone replied!!!! Thanks you for saying something!!! And thanks for thinking that it is at least okay. My mom said it was good. But moms always say that :)
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post #6 of 17 Old 05-09-2013, 09:52 AM
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I thought it was great and I enjoyed reading it.
Many thanks.
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post #7 of 17 Old 05-10-2013, 02:13 PM Thread Starter
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Thank you!!!!!!!!
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post #8 of 17 Old 05-10-2013, 05:11 PM
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hiya you imspired me to rite one lol.
I think you did a great poem.
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post #9 of 17 Old 05-11-2013, 10:44 AM Thread Starter
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Oh thanks!!! I just love him so much and I know you love your horses too (who couldn't?!!!??) so I'm sure anyone who loves their horses can write a great poem. Who'll you post yours?

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post #10 of 17 Old 05-11-2013, 10:45 AM Thread Starter
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*will you post yours?

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